Compared it against about 30 real scripts, including Thaana, Tai Viet, Sundanese, Batak, Ol Chiki, Kayah Li, Pahawh Hmong, Pollard Miao and Malayalam. Nothing matched. My best read is a constructed script or personal cipher. The marks above and below letters suggest vowels are written as diacritics, the way many Indian and Southeast Asian scripts work. The layout (two four-line stanzas with commas) looks like a poem. The crossed-out word in the last line suggests someone writing fluently in a system they knew, not doodling.
One lead I haven't ruled out is a fantasy script with vowel marks, like Tolkien's Tengwar, used to write English or another language. The letter shapes don't look like a good match to me, but it's worth checking.
r/conlangs, where people who invent scripts may recognize the design
r/translator, which has an "Unknown" flair for this kind of thing
Omniglot, which has a large catalog of real and invented scripts
On r/codes, mention that lines 2 and 5 begin with the same two words. Repeated words like that are what cipher solvers use to crack substitution systems.
Compared it against about 30 real scripts, including Thaana, Tai Viet, Sundanese, Batak, Ol Chiki, Kayah Li, Pahawh Hmong, Pollard Miao and Malayalam. Nothing matched. My best read is a constructed script or personal cipher. The marks above and below letters suggest vowels are written as diacritics, the way many Indian and Southeast Asian scripts work. The layout (two four-line stanzas with commas) looks like a poem. The crossed-out word in the last line suggests someone writing fluently in a system they knew, not doodling.
One lead I haven't ruled out is a fantasy script with vowel marks, like Tolkien's Tengwar, used to write English or another language. The letter shapes don't look like a good match to me, but it's worth checking.
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On r/codes, mention that lines 2 and 5 begin with the same two words. Repeated words like that are what cipher solvers use to crack substitution systems.